gaborrero t1_ixs7o9k wrote
Reply to comment by gaborrero in [WP] You visit a shady pawn shop and find a battered blacksmith's hammer that seems to silently call out to you. What you're unaware of is this hammer used to belong to the god of the blacksmiths. by Shadrak_Meduson
Reinita awoke with a start and flung the pillow off her face, looking to the window. It was already night, and her stomach reminded her of the fact she needed to eat.
She pushed herself out of bed and headed into the kitchen. There, she found some quickly-going-stale bread left out, sliced. "Mom," she said quietly to nobody, as the kitchen was devoid of presence save herself. "Thank you."
When she finished eating, Reinita went and sought out the family bible, which contained in it her mother's genealogy and the stories of their faith. One day, she knew, this would be her book. She never had an urge to read it before, but the figure in her dream was familiar to her. She sat on the couch and read from the beginning.
>It is said nobody truly knows Who came first. In the beginning, there was darkness; in time came the stars. It is said that, seeing the void of space and the great lengths between the stars that land of iron was created.
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>This first land that was created was wide and the playground of creation, in which Caprea formed the first life. Its shape was as wild as its spirit, and in truth, Caprea's spirit as well. There was little more she enjoyed than creating being after being, but soon, their number grew too vast.
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>She took her most perfect creations and had them placed in another land above the Realm of Iron, the Realm of Gold. This land was far smaller and populated by the Gods. It was there that the Gods took inspiration from Caprea and began to create Their own life forms, amongst them humankind, which they sent down to the Realm of Silver. Caprea, satisfied with the fractal infinity of creation She had seen brought about, took to resting and was never heard from again. Those who leave Her offerings find themselves with neither help nor response.
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>The Gods, as They are named, were... And many names were listed. But among them, the one who caught her attention was, ... Madofue, Lord of the Stellar Forge...
Reinita flipped through the book until she found the relevant chapter.
>MADOFUE, LORD OF THE STELLAR FORGE
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>A titan among men, Madofue is most noted for His single arm. He is the ugliest of the Gods, and for this, one of his titles is "The Ugly." Even the kindest and most compassionate of Gods laugh at His countenance, offering Him little more than pity at best. He was the one who forged the weapons the Gods used to fight back the Army of Iron. Not much is needed to be said about this God, whose existence - while honorable - is unfortunate and unhappy.
Just before sunrise, her mother came into the living room wearing a flaxen nightgown. "... going to shave your head and become a priestess?" she joked.
"Ugh," Reinita said in response, rolling her eyes.
"What got you reading the bible all of the sudden?"
"I had a dream about a man at an anvil. It sounds a little like Madofue, doesn't it?"
Her mother's silence made Reinita choke the words out once more, though she failed to spare her mother so much as a glance. "It... sounds a little... like Madofue, right? Doesn't it?"
"... I suppose so," she sighed and walked around the couch to take a seat next to her daughter. "Reinita... there's something I ought to talk to you about."
"Not interested, reading the bible."
"Reading can wait," said her mother.
"No, whatever it is you have to say can wait." Reinita turned the page. "The guy in my dream wasn't exactly hot, but if it was supposed to be Madofue, why was He called the ugliest of all the Gods?"
"Well, if I had to guess, it had to be in comparison, as decided by those doing the judging," said her mother with a shrug. "The followers of Madofue are often lacking in looks and are deformed in some way."
"You say that like you know any," said Reinita as she turned the page, reading. "I mean, you are a gossip, so it shouldn't surprise me that you would know at least one."
"Ugh! Rei! Where are your manners? I'm your mother, not your friend, be respectful!"
"Stop hounding me to get married, first. YOU never got married."
"That's what I want to talk to you about."
Reinita's nose curled in disgust. "Ew, no."
"Not... not how you were made. Well. A little." Before her daughter could counter her or make any sound of distress, "I mean who made you."
Reinita looked at her mother now, giving her proper attention. "Does it matter? He was a deadbeat, he never stuck around to find out what would happen."
"It does matter. It matters a lot. Let me tell you about him, and his connection to Madofue."
Slowly, the young woman closed the bible on her lap. "Alright, mom. I'm listening, but you better tell me what he's got to do with Madofue first!"
Jacky1111111 t1_ixsafch wrote
Brother i feel like this will be a good story if you decide to finish and your a really good writer, feels like you could be an author or are one
gaborrero t1_ixsefuh wrote
Thank you so much! I am self-published through Amazon, just one book. I'm glad you and everyone else enjoyed what I wrote and I hope to write additional enjoyable stories in the future!
Jacky1111111 t1_ixsemic wrote
I know your gonna do amazing, also what's the book called?
gaborrero t1_ixsfuih wrote
Dreams of Pelagy.
Jacky1111111 t1_ixsfxhy wrote
Alright then thank tou
Rou2_Rambo t1_ixtvbun wrote
holy shit, this slaps. awaiting new updates if any are coming.
McModknower t1_ixuji5m wrote
I like this story. Please ping me when/if you continue this.
shmueliko t1_ixvks69 wrote
This story is awesome. Are you planning to do a part 5 to this?
CoruptedUsername t1_ixxo13l wrote
Part 5 perchance?
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