Viewing a single comment thread. View all comments

ArcherOk6427 t1_iy98oxe wrote

Reply to comment by F1600A in [WP] You're a 'comically incompetent' supervillain for a group of C-List heroes. They are no real threat to you, so you endure their childish speeches. However, when the heroes raid the civilian business you run on the side and injure your employees, you decide to take yourself seriously for once. by Informal_Ad_6157

Love the story. Only comment would be maybe incorporating how she was sipping the drink with broken hands and and take out/adjust her opening the envelope at the end.

5

F1600A t1_iy9gcp0 wrote

....shit. I forgot that I broke her hands. You think it would be okay to go back and edit?

9

AichSmize t1_iycmzmf wrote

Of course it is. Writing is always revised.

4