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AdmiralAthena t1_iybzqky wrote on November 30, 2022 at 6:59 AM

Reply to comment by exponentials in [WP] The Villain finished his monologue. Civilians standing around waited for the Hero to begin the fight, "Well, what are waiting for? Demolish the bad guy!" The Hero responded, "Hang on, he's made a couple of good points. We should hear him out." by WrongEinstein

The ending seems abrupt and out of nowhere.

Almost kinda anti climatic. Like, it builds something cool up, and then this shadow guy comes out of nowhere and destroys the plot.

exponentials t1_iyc51s9 wrote on November 30, 2022 at 8:11 AM

Thanks for the feedback. 🙏🏻

CoffeeBoom t1_iyc82p8 wrote on November 30, 2022 at 8:55 AM

Rock fall, you die