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EllipsisMark t1_iy9dvuj wrote

Quickie

"You were my beta reader. I edited according to your feedback. I even put you in the dedication."

Flips over book, "To my beautiful love. May your suffering of my first drafts not be in vain. Aww... it was. Your book still sucks."

"Sigh. At least I tried. What's for dinner?"

Fin.

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lemoinem t1_iy9es96 wrote

I would have put the Quickie before the Fin

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EllipsisMark t1_iy9rtf7 wrote

Quickie as in "A quick story" instead of a full blown entry.

Fin as in "The End".

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lemoinem t1_iy9s1jq wrote

I know that. I would still have put Quickie as the answer of "What's for dinner?"

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Tomorrow_Is_Today1 t1_iyb7hjn wrote

"It's because you've only read the first page, dumbass. I showed you stuff 3/4 of the way through"

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