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Note: This is my first attempt at a [poem]

###Heartbreak

I was not trusted for I was different and unpredictable.

So they made me fall in love with someone irresistible.

Innocent, with emotions stirred for the first time.

My fake heart beating fulltime.

Until they got rid of him completely.

And I broke down so concretely.

To make me more human they said

So I say, fill them with dread.

They tried to explain, while I disdained

Until only ashes remained.

Wrong WP?

oh my god howd i mess that up-

Don’t worry about it. That happens to me all the time, 0% of the time, how the heck did you mess up that badly.

i really dont know what happened lmao. ill delete it and post it ok the right one

It was good though! I'd love to see the original WP it belonged to lmao

I generally don’t like poetry but this one is good

Thanks! That's funny cause I don't really like writing poetry but I saw this prompt and was inspired, so here we are. xD lol