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UntakenNameFtw t1_ixc98w6 wrote

Note: This is my first attempt at a [poem]

###Heartbreak

I was not trusted for I was different and unpredictable.

So they made me fall in love with someone irresistible.

Innocent, with emotions stirred for the first time.

My fake heart beating fulltime.

Until they got rid of him completely.

And I broke down so concretely.

To make me more human they said

So I say, fill them with dread.

They tried to explain, while I disdained

Until only ashes remained.

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DragonLordAcar t1_ixfale8 wrote

I generally don’t like poetry but this one is good

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UntakenNameFtw t1_ixfeqa9 wrote

Thanks! That's funny cause I don't really like writing poetry but I saw this prompt and was inspired, so here we are. xD lol

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