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FarsLasagne OP t1_iu5uiqk wrote

Reply to comment by RolledANat1 in [WP] You are a superbully, you use your abilities to bully heroes and villains. by FarsLasagne

The whole vicious mockery thing was a very interesting Way to incoperate the bully aspect! And i mean that in a good way, very creative!

There seems to be a typo? It says in one sentence “until one day i domed my bully” which is confusing, Maybe i just forgot a Word tho.

Other than that its super great! I felt a Lot of personality in the Way you wrote it!

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RolledANat1 t1_iu642es wrote

no, domed is intentional. basically gamer slang for bashing someone down.

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FarsLasagne OP t1_iu66omt wrote

Ah! Guess Im really a fake gamer “girl”

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RolledANat1 t1_iu68fc3 wrote

lol eh it's not super common; actually kind of a mid 2011-2017 term. Don't sell yourself short.

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FarsLasagne OP t1_iu69y0z wrote

Im not, just wanted to make a Lil joke.

Did you put it there so readers could have a feel for the time Line?

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RolledANat1 t1_iu6ar41 wrote

More just putting in my own thinking, the way I would essentially write a journal entry or if I was talking to someone explaining myself.

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