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DIGI-LRD t1_irhql2s wrote

Reply to comment by sootspot in [WP] You acquire a magic notebook. Write a person’s name and last name on it, and they’ll like you. Write more details about them, and they’ll like you more. The deeper the detail, the more they’ll love you. by Kenhamef

i like this maybe just maybe you’ll write a book about this and at the end addie will realize the book was never magic but melanie was magic and could mind read and the entire time she actually liked her or something maybe idk

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sootspot t1_irhr3qz wrote

Holy shit I love that idea!!!! This is absolutely one of my favorite stories I've written for this subreddit. I would totally expand on it.

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DIGI-LRD t1_irhsnad wrote

yesss one piece of advice is avoid love triangles that end up being really cringey as long as there not cringy and have a dramatic turn out of nowhere that no one can predict your more then golden sootspot

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sootspot t1_irhszr1 wrote

Oh man I have never tried to write a love triangle haha. Dramatic turns I can do! And thanks for the lovely feedback. 💚

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DIGI-LRD t1_irhthga wrote

yeah i actually really believe in you and this story and can’t wait for more parts but i think avoiding a love triangle would be better but this is all up to you soot i’ll be waiting for more

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sootspot t1_irhtl8i wrote

You're so kind. 🥹 Thank you. Your feedback made my night.

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DIGI-LRD t1_irhtu6p wrote

aye that’s what i’m here for the first sentence had me intrigued i’ll be waiting for the next parts of the story maybe when you finish writing them you can message me them so i can read it i worry i might forget about this because i read a lot of writing prompts and stories

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