AShellfishLover t1_iufss5t wrote
Reply to comment by AShellfishLover in [WP] You’re exploring a remote area, when you find a guy chained to a rock getting his liver eaten by birds. You, not having the slightest knowledge of Greek mythological, decide to help. by brainthinkin
The Stranger's captive was no longer tied to the stone, and the bird that had been tearing at the captive's stomach had disappeared along with the arena. The wounds I had seen before were gone, replaced with a mass of scars across his chest and stomach. The captive curled into the fetal position, and I went to check on the man I just saved.
His face was rugged. While the Stranger and his watchers' faces were handsome in their perfection, the captive's features were more primitive, carved from clay rather than marble. Lines marked his mouth, as if finally relaxed after a permanent scream. I rubbed his back as I had countless friends in pain before, and the captive relaxed, turning over on his back.
"Thank you, kind sir. You cannot know how long it has been that I was held there by the Tartarean." the free man whispered. "If there is anything I can do, any gift I can offer, I'd give it gladly."
"Heh, I don't think you have much to offer, friend, but th—"
He grabbed my arm and I looked into the captive's eyes.
"Fire. Knowledge. I have much to give. So, so many things... lessons from the Gods. Your people learned to harness the power of Zeus, to sail across Poseidon's great seas, to hammer out weapons that would make Haephestus weep and Ares slaver in jealousy. You have gained a way to transfer Gnosis through nets of fine wire, but why stop there?"
Then the visions came. A world without death. A world without want. A world perfect and ablaze with the passions of intellect.
And above them all I sat, sitting in a Throne of twisted bronze. But it wasn't me. The eyes, those cruel and vicious eyes
I felt Spot licking me through my torn pants, and it was the only thing that saved me. The captive had wrapped me in his embrace, his eyes wild and staring into mine, spittle running out of the corners of his mouth.
The blade slid in clean. His eyes clouded, and I let his body fall back to the slab.
I dug the grave shallow, my small trench shovel ill-equipped for the work in this gravelly mess. I wrapped his body in the shroud he had risen in as my lantern cast strange shadows in the clearing. I saw my fate in a thousand shadows, a hundred deaths, a hundred happy endings.
But each was mine.
Equal-Researcher-329 t1_iuftgpf wrote
I love that the dogs named spot, just makes me think Jason’s walking around with Cerberus
AShellfishLover t1_iufv7me wrote
Yep, that was the tie-in. I liked the idea of a sort of reincarnation vibe so I went there. If I had spent more time in the sprint I would have worked more out
Equal-Researcher-329 t1_iufzhrn wrote
Oh sweet
cjrw32 t1_iufu6i1 wrote
That was a great read.
AShellfishLover t1_iufucbf wrote
Thanks! If you ignore my posts in magictcg you'll find a bunch of prompts, these are some of the last before I tuck in for nanowrimo
Gruuler t1_iug7shn wrote
No, don’t ignore the mtg posts! Join us everyone!
Great job on the story, this was excellent!
AShellfishLover t1_iugfe66 wrote
It's been... a rough week in mtg. I'd say give them a bit.
Omen224 t1_iuj7lha wrote
Happy cake day!
lestairwellwit t1_iugirr4 wrote
Completely haiku-esque (is that a word? I mean it's only three syllables... )
The metaphor, simile and more is fantastic
Thank you for this
AShellfishLover t1_iugj4zn wrote
A whole prompt written in haiku but presented in prose could be a fun one.
lestairwellwit t1_iugl7vm wrote
In a smokey haze
Fabled and so forgotten
Stone tied and tortured
--
His crime, fire to man
Just a flame meant to protect
His fault was to uplift
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Yes, Prometheus
We stand on smoldering stone
Us, to the future
shadowylurking t1_iugjkzu wrote
very well done. felt like i was reading a myth
AShellfishLover t1_iuibbxf wrote
Thanks! It was a fun prompt to write.
Grafenbrgr t1_iuh7o4z wrote
Fuck. I thoroughly enjoyed that. Great stuff.
ThehellHound01 t1_iuifaqw wrote
Dude got a helping hand from dionysus
ThehellHound01 t1_iuihb9u wrote
So is he the reincarnation of the actual Jason?
AShellfishLover t1_iuihgx4 wrote
I leave it open-ended as to whether it's the case but wanted to give the reincarnation vibe as a little nod to the concept of the eternal champion.
ThehellHound01 t1_iuii37x wrote
Then you did an excellent job
Omen224 t1_iuj7pk5 wrote
My congratulations!
AShellfishLover t1_iuj7vvz wrote
What am I being congratulated for? 😄
Omen224 t1_iujb72x wrote
Sorry, it must not have gone through the first time. Hold on.
AShellfishLover t1_iujbf0j wrote
Aww, thank you so much! If you wanna check out my other stuff I have other prompts in my profile!
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