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Mr_hushbrown t1_iu3ca2r wrote

Reply to comment by Mira_Fox225 in [WP]No one know how the zombie virus began, but humanity is on the ropes. A powerful stranger cuts through the horde one night and reaches your compound's wall with a deal. Vampires are starving. Help feed them in exchange for protection from the other undead menace. by cesly1987

Same. As my old high school English teacher liked to say: “brevity is best. Trim the fat from your drafts”.

Great story u/SirPiecemaker!

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SirPiecemaker t1_iu44562 wrote

I somewhat pride myself on my stories having no fat, or at least trying not to.

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