Submitted by cesly1987 t3_yep2bf in WritingPrompts
SirPiecemaker t1_itzqjm8 wrote
"It's like drinking water contaminated by dead bodies," the man said. "Exactly as disgusting and *ow* unusable as you'd expect *ah* blast it all!" he hissed in pain as I put another stitch into his arm. The bite was rather nasty and his pained grins exposed the sharp fangs in his mouth; a somewhat uncomfortable reminder of his nature.
"And you're sure you can't be infected?" I asked.
Without a word he lifted his shirt and revealed a large bite mark on his stomach, a clear imprint of human teeth that had long healed. Infection normally takes only some 12-odd hours, so... good enough for me.
"Done," I said and put down the needle and thread. I pulled away from him on my stool as he lowered his sleeve and moved his shoulder around, stretching it.
"How long will it take to heal?" I wondered.
"About a day."
"Impressive."
"Had worse. Javelin through the heart once," he stated nonchalantly
"So... stakes through the heart won't kill you?" I asked. He gave me a somewhat suspicious look but shrugged.
"No. Neither will the Sun, garlic, bullets, or, well..." he said and pointed towards the fence where the zombies still shuffled aimlessly. "But hunger will," he added grimly and looked back at me.
"Right," I said. "So..." I trailed off.
"Look, you're not exactly wild about the idea. I get it, really. I may not be exactly human, but I'm not a monster either. This is a simple matter of survival for both of us. How many people have you lost to them so far? I can protect you!" he pleaded.
"In exchange for our blood," I said. He nodded. "I'm not sure we can properly... provide for you. We have, let's see... 8 men but 2 are sick; drinking their blood would kill them. 4 women, 3 children-"
"No children," he interrupted sternly.
"What?"
"No. Children," he repeated. His face was suddenly dark and brooding. "I'd rather let them tear me apart," he growled. I looked at him; his resolution seemed genuine and absolute. Admirable, I thought.
"It is enough, luckily," he continued. "I don't need as much as you'd think."
I took a deep breath and considered the situation. He was right. That was the worst part. The last time a horde passed through, we lost 3 people just trying to defend the compound. He just fought his way in through about four dozen of them with only a scratch.
I looked him in the eye. Despite it all, hell, despite the fact that his eyes were blood-red, he looked... honest. I extended my hand.
"I'm Abidugun," I said.
"One born before the war," he smiled. "Fitting." Him knowing the meaning of my name put me at ease, somehow. He extended his own hand and shook it.
"Viktor," he smiled, the moon reflecting off of his fangs. "A vampire teaming up with humans against zombies," he chuckled. "Hollywood, here we come."
And, for the first time in what seemed like forever... I laughed.
Mira_Fox225 t1_iu0rd8s wrote
I like this, it’s short and sweet
Mr_hushbrown t1_iu3ca2r wrote
Same. As my old high school English teacher liked to say: “brevity is best. Trim the fat from your drafts”.
Great story u/SirPiecemaker!
SirPiecemaker t1_iu44562 wrote
I somewhat pride myself on my stories having no fat, or at least trying not to.
Carteie t1_iu3rphn wrote
Literature Devil?
Me-as-I t1_iu35ha2 wrote
mmmm like children
Nosnmad t1_iu3co8f wrote
r/holup
NuttyDuckyYT t1_iu1vi2v wrote
aww the last few lines are sweet
they are besties now
POOPdiver t1_iu2ktdr wrote
This is short but perfect. I’d love to see something like this fleshed out
y6ird t1_iu34p2d wrote
Mmmmm… flesh…
CuteBlackberry75 t1_iu1puiq wrote
I need more
Roguespiffy t1_iu3tn3c wrote
There was a web comic with this exact premise a long time ago which stopped because it had been optioned as a movie. Don’t recall the movie ever coming out so I assume it was lost in development hell. Can’t remember the name though.
cesly1987 OP t1_iu4afvj wrote
Some told me in Dm it was called Last Blood
sleeper_shark t1_iu3drsc wrote
Brilliant
Big_Eyed_Wonder t1_iu3nlcx wrote
Humanising the mythical monsters. The warmth it brings to the reader is what makes this a good read. Keep it up.
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