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Twijasosm t1_iuc6gjg wrote

This was a joy to read and I think I just figured out a way to improve it. Have it so that “John” is actually an acronym for J.O.H.N which can be like “Janitorial Oscillation Homing… something. Basically have him be A type of Wall-e robot that looks hyper realistically human and has been stuck alone on this outpost for hundreds of years at this point. And the reason he was successfully able to summon the Demoness is because over the long years he spent in isolation, he actually developed his own soul.

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ShutUpYoureWrong_ t1_iuckvbl wrote

No offense, but that is definitely not an improvement.

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Twijasosm t1_iud05ff wrote

To each his own. I still like it.

Edit: also, I love your username

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