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Seaofgioy t1_itcy4pn wrote

Reply to comment by Lavantha in [WP] The hero looks at you shocked and disgusted. "So... your plan is to make a... giant meatball out of every single person on earth...?" Scratching their head they frown and ask, "But, why?" by Affectionate-Row-534

I liked the titan take buuuut, you really need this: You're =you are; Your= you own. Too much Two things; To spell.

Not that bad, is it! Thank you for your story! Reminded me of zeus and Chronos a bit, with a God of War vibe.

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Lavantha t1_itcymiy wrote

I know :( I have spelling problems but I also really like writing, they conflict each other a lot

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Seaofgioy t1_itd0vea wrote

They don't, or rather, won't, with enough practice! Keep on writing, and reading of course! Always read twice, and post once. Alchemy is supposed to be "measure twice, mix once", and writers are alchemists that conjure wonders with mere words! Keep up the passion!

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BrightFirelyt t1_itf1zpe wrote

We all start somewhere. Don't worry. Just keep writing, and eventually all the rules and spellings will become second nature.

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