Thanks for the feedback Fye!

Interesting to see that Allen came off as he did to you. I deleted a sentence of his from the paragraph where he talks about the event. Originally, he said "Sex tapes just don't cut it any more." But it didn't sit right that he would say that while he reached out and touched her hand. Seemed just overtly predatory.

And "intensive purposes" was deliberate. I threw in "irregardless" as well. But I think that's less egregious so it may not have been enough of a tell.

I think if I started from scratch I'd describe the contract side of it a bit differently. But all of these parts she's going through make up one contract. So she held out on the final piece after deciding she wanted more money. (Allen is a bad attorney for formatting the contract like this)

Thanks again. Always look forward to your comments.