Submitted by Starkeeper_Reddit t3_126oxu5 in WritingPrompts
catschr0dinger t1_jeei4m0 wrote
Reply to comment by catschr0dinger in [SP] A grim reaper comforts a fading child. by Starkeeper_Reddit
this is my first time writing here, so I'm wondering what you all think of it. Is it off-putting calling the grim reaper's scythe a 'lightsaber'? i tried to kind of write it from the boy's perspective but it was also in 3rd person so I'm not sure how well that worked out.
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