Submitted by Ok-Mastodon2016 t3_1255hz4 in WritingPrompts
justadimestorepoet t1_je44ggi wrote
Reply to comment by Mrmander20 in [WP] you and your party are on a sidequest for a witch's potion and you have to go inside their hut. But when the coven of three discovers you, they're overjoyed and you're just embarrassed, you look to your party and say "everyone, these three are my moms" by Ok-Mastodon2016
Love, love, love this! Wish I could upvote multiple times. It reminds me of stories like Stardust (there are probably better examples, but I just read it fairly recently and I've only just started getting into fantasy novels), with the tongue-in-cheek tone mixed with an overall groundedness. I think the last line would have hit sooner and harder if this was say, a hundred pages into the tale of our heroes (however long it would take to become familiar with them and their dynamic), but once it sunk in, I think I gasped a little.
Brilliant work. If this was a novel, I would buy it immediately.
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