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NicomacheanOrc OP t1_jd6t5j5 wrote

Reply to comment by fhangrin in [WP] "You're the best person I've ever known," you say, and you both draw your blades. "I will regret your death more than all the others of the world." He replies quietly: "I know, my child, and I give my blessing to the world you'll make. But let us start your story, and end mine." And you clash. by NicomacheanOrc

That's a great last line. First I thought about the feather, contrasting against the mountain. Cool, cool. And then I thought about the "home" part, and it really hit me. And then I thought about the "we" part and it blew my mind.

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fhangrin t1_jd6ye2p wrote

See, now I wanna know what conclusions you drew.

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