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QuantisOne OP t1_je8fxxv wrote

Chilling. An ironic thought, that this segregative system prevents any improvement whatsoever, separating reformed people and those still in need of guidance. Hell is real now, because they crafted it as such. It’s another interesting take, like every person that moves gets some parallel life, be it better or worse. A scary thought, to imagine what Rederick could have done to earn a one-way ticket back to Earth 7. But this idea of people feeling like they “belong” to a specific society, be it specifically good or bad, is another thing that could be expanded a lot.

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ANakedCowboy t1_jeag3bw wrote

Great prompt! Wish I'd had more time so I didn't have to rush the story. I loved the idea of someone being forced to move up against their will, and then forcing their way back with some implied evil :D

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