Joelin8r t1_jdity87 wrote
"That's it then, eh?"
"That's it."
"Just the two of us on a bench."
"All ya need, really."
"Not exactly compelling, is it?"
"Who said it has to be? Everyone's out there bringing Death Itself, God, the Devil, floating head numbers and time travel... A little inconsequential chat would be nice, wouldn't it?"
"I guess I just don't much see the point."
"Not yet, at least."
"Oh, so you do? You see some grand purpose in this chat? In this bench?"
"Never said it would be grand."
"But there is some purpose. There's something to this, right?"
"..."
"..."
"Think I just saw a Blue Jay."
"Thrilling."
"..."
"How long do we have to sit here for? It's not like there's a grand story arc that will find a pointed resolution."
"I'm sure they'll wrap it up when they get bored of us."
"And then what?"
"Well, nothing really. Then we're done."
"So that's all we get? Just the two of us on a bench for a few paltry minutes until suddenly we poof out of existence?"
"I think you'll find we all have a time limit shorter than we'd like."
"Oh and do we all have to sit on a bench with an old soul who can't admit he's been dealt a shit hand in a rigged game?"
"You seem very upset about all this."
"Of course I'm upset! I coulda been a dragon! A god! One of those humans who wipes out an alien race because we're just so goddamn special!"
"Those stories all end too, y'know."
"Yeah well I coulda at least done something cool in my time."
"Hmm..."
"..."
"Beautiful day."
"There's no stopping you, is there?"
"I'm just trying to enjoy my time here, is that so wrong?"
"It's futile! Useless! We're gonna just stop existing any second anyway!"
"Ah yes. Much better to spend the time we have wishing it was some other way."
"I... Hm."
"Nice of them to make it so warm out for us."
"Yes, yes I suppose that much is nice."
"I think the two under that tree are on a date."
"I think you're right. I always loved picnic dates. Dirt cheap but some of my best dates have been just good conversation and a blanket in a park."
"Hmm... How do you think it's going for them?"
"Does it matter? We both know there's not gonna be a second date."
"Even so, I think it's going very well." The girl laughed at something the boy had told her, leaning her shoulder on his as she did. She said something back that sent him into his own fit of laughter, both going back and forth building on the bit. They were happy.
"...Yeah, I think you're right."
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Joelin8r t1_jdkh0ng wrote
Thanks!
That's fun! I intentionally left out any description of them because my own ideas of what they might look like weren't really relevant, even though I had something in my head. It's neat to see how that results in others coming up with their own ideas of what they look like, even subconsciously!
[deleted] t1_jdkcpfi wrote
I like this, it’s a unique take
MrRedoot55 t1_jdkxafu wrote
It seems things don't have to be eventful for them to matter.
...even then, I guess seeing Mordecai himself is worthy of note.
Good job.
PancakeTune t1_jdl1kfc wrote
Absolutely adore your R and G are Dead take on this prompt!
Joelin8r t1_jdl59en wrote
Never seen it, but having looked it up I'm glad to merit the comparison!
Omen224 t1_jdl4592 wrote
Rosencrantz and guildenstern vibes
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