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Repq t1_je2tqc1 wrote

[Poem]

The day arrives! Your assignment awaits!

It’s time for the teams to know there fates.

Your future is coming, and so is your class.

The deck with clear cards, practically glass.

Pick a card, watch it change color.

Is it red or blue? Wait, another‽

This one is purple, with etchings of a clock,

and spinning brown spirals that’s pulling y- STOP!

It’s calling you into a deeper trance.

With an outstretched hand, “care for a dance?”

NO! STOP! YOU MUST RESIST!

Why stop now when in a bliss?

Black and white, it’s all a cliché.

I think it’s time to add some gray.

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Xexotic_wolfX OP t1_je2vrgq wrote

Not gonna lie, I was kinda going for story responses, so I wasn’t expecting to see a poem, but this is honestly amazing! Very well written, and very interesting. I loved this, especially the last two lines.

Great work!

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