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versenwald3 t1_jcoocz9 wrote on March 18, 2023 at 11:35 AM

Reply to comment by Krutaun in [WP] Everyone has something referred to as “Narrative Potential Energy” the higher this value is, the more involved in a story you are. Protagonists have a high amount as they drive the story forward, and background characters have little. Somehow you have negative narrative potential. by -Mothonawall-

lovely poem, i really liked it!

Krutaun t1_jcop5ot wrote on March 18, 2023 at 11:45 AM

Ah, thank you! Glad you liked it!

Narrow_Atmosphere996 t1_jcplpg5 wrote on March 18, 2023 at 4:07 PM

I really like the ninth verse (not actually sure if thats the right word, but i hope you know what I mean)

nice job

kilgenmus t1_jcqebz3 wrote on March 18, 2023 at 7:22 PM

Stanza?

Jyx_The_Berzer_King t1_jcqn5sx wrote on March 18, 2023 at 8:26 PM

yep