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AB_Wordsmythe_Esq t1_jd680j0 wrote on March 22, 2023 at 2:58 AM

Reply to comment by SilasCrane in [WP] The wizard is actually not immortal. Instead he steals just a minute from everyone every few thousand years or so (justifying it to himself by all the good he does for them). Though everyone loses consciousness for a moment, nobody talks about it, and it is soon forgotten. by chacham2

The amount of worldbuilding and reader investment in the world and character you've done in two replies is goddamned respectable here.

I feel like I could take notes off of this on how to write. Wow.

jasonhackwith t1_jd6uy4s wrote on March 22, 2023 at 7:14 AM

I wholeheartedly agree.

This needs to be a novel.