Submitted by X01Eagle t3_11iy1lg in WritingPrompts
ryry1237 t1_jb3xfkl wrote
Reply to comment by andrius-b in [WP] - The vampire steps out, and his daughters cower and kneel where they stand. You ready yourself for the fight. Before you can raise your weapon, though, the vampire sighs, and with an embarrassed tone, says, “I’m really quite sorry for the trouble…” by X01Eagle
You somehow made navigating social niceties far more tense than any fight against creatures of the night.
Beckitkit t1_jb4pjem wrote
You summed it up nicely.
Well done writer, you had me completely absorbed. I wish there was more.
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