DPS3 t1_je45pji wrote
Reply to comment by Remarkable-Youth-504 in [WP] A demon king is contacted by the gods "look, the hero coming after you is 10, can you just play along and let him win?" by EndorDerDragonKing
Damn. This is really good. Sad, heart wrenching, but very, very well done. The foreshadowing in how you described the hero and the lead up to this are excellent ways to key in the reader without them realizing off the bat. 10/10
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