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Slaywraith t1_j9u6qt6 wrote
So, write a true story, then? 😉😁
xylophonesRus OP t1_j9uosxs wrote
Not saying I necessarily agree with you... 😜
SR_Z3R0_ t1_j9v55v2 wrote
i was perplexed, the giant paw, the called “paw of god” in the news. everything i knew about it was just thrown out of the window, the holy books were wrong, all of them, or maybe it was only misinterpreted. but caos was in the world, the paws were destroying everything that go his attention, people were thrown out of the atmosphere, buildings collapsed, planes crashed, and a lot more in a time of only 4 minutes.
when suddenly something got my attention, the giant paw was in my neighborhood, i could see his claws, They are so gentle, but yet so powerful.
-”meow” we all heard
-”meoooow!!!” it sounded pissed
all the cats started going to it, more paws came down from heaven, proving once more that we were wrong, the heaven isn’t ours, we don’t deserve it.
-”meow” a gently sound came
-”you are wondering why, why you all aren’t going to heaven” a sweet voice came from above. it got us by surprise
-”you must pay for your sins” the voice said
-”then you be allowed to the heavens i promised” it continued
turns out that the books were not wrong completely, and we maybe could get a chance.
“god, help us, help your people” i prayed
-”no praying will help now” it said
-”i will be back to pick who is truly mine” it finished
but the chaos was installed. when all the cats and other animals got up, we were left with only plants. The world economy crashed after that. me and a few survivors of my region created a little safe region with a small farm, that's only the start of our new civilization witch may continue till he’s back.
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xylophonesRus OP t1_j9v5k57 wrote
Perfect fucking first real comment! Lol it actually gave me the warm-and-fuzzies 😂
SR_Z3R0_ t1_j9v5ob9 wrote
Lol, I think maybe later I will make a finish for it
SR_Z3R0_ t1_ja3lw10 wrote
the part 2 of this story is out
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