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MarianeAicimoun t1_jae4df4 wrote

Reply to comment by KarmicWhim in [WP] As a professional assassin, you open the message with your new assignment. To your surprise, the target is your spouse. The payment being offered is substantial. by still_thinking_

WOW!!! 😳😲😵

I am seriously blown up!! WHAAAAAAT?? I JUST WATCHED AN EPIC EPISODE OF SUPER-SPIES TRAINING SESSION IN A SUPER SCI-FI SERIES ( ALL THIS WHILE READING!!!)

HOLLY CRAP!! THIS IS GOLD!! YOU DESERVE AN AWARD: A 24 CARAT GOLD REVOLVER, WITH DESIGNED SILVER BULLETS. ( WOULD YOU ACCEPT THAT GIFT IF I HAD IT, OR WOULD YOU PREFER SOMETHING ELSE?)

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MarianeAicimoun t1_jae4urd wrote

If I may, I have one remark . The paragraph in the middle where all the interesting action happen is too long ' it is block-ed up'' makes readding difficult. Anything else is neet!!

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