Submitted by OldBayJ t3_113bpzd in WritingPrompts
RecklessSpeculation t1_j8yzsj6 wrote
Reply to comment by Blu_Spirit in [OT] Poetry Corner: Fire! by OldBayJ
You do a lot with little here, and I appreciate that. The depictions of winter and spring convey their seasons effortlessly.
I would offer that "Autumn rain storms flood" is somewhat clunky in that it has two interpretations for a reader: "Autumn rain storms flood" with rainstorms as the subject and flood as the verb or "Autumn rain storms flood" with rain as the subject and storms as the verb and then flood just kinda lying there at the end.
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