Sivarl t1_j9fmx49 wrote
Reply to comment by QuantumCat2019 in [WP] Metallic blood is a rarity in the universe, only reserved for the gods! The crew is shocked when their human captain accidentally cuts himself. by Lootgodcosen
Life happens.
I think it would be stronger without the final paragraph, but it was good.
Cyrus_Blame t1_j9fp2af wrote
This but cutting just the last two sentences
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