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Cyrus_Blame t1_j9f3cnd wrote

Reply to comment by QuantumCat2019 in [WP] Metallic blood is a rarity in the universe, only reserved for the gods! The crew is shocked when their human captain accidentally cuts himself. by Lootgodcosen

I like this story but the ending feels rushed

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QuantumCat2019 t1_j9fh2es wrote

agreed but my pause was ending and needed back to work

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Sivarl t1_j9fmx49 wrote

Life happens.

I think it would be stronger without the final paragraph, but it was good.

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