Submitted by BlueFlameGhost t3_110pxox in WritingPrompts
HoneypuffCereal t1_j8aoyit wrote
It's strange really. Back in the days, when I was untouched by her, this place would have been just a police office. Drunkards in the tank, officers going about their day. Occasional tension might pop up when some looney started arguing about a ticket they got while they were alone on the road.
Now, it's different. The texture is different. I can see the texture of the concrete walls as if I was up close, yet I stand far away. People's smells cling to the inside of my nose, as if I were standing next to them. Their thoughts dance through my mind, thinking of everything and nothing, from hope to fear, from lust to revulsion.
The pattern has repeated itself more times than I can fathom, but this pattern must be broken. I scan the room and find an officer looking at me. His brow furrows and his eyes squint, highlighting the dark circles of sleeplessness nights. I hear his thoughts putting things together. I know him. He's been around. It's his personal mission to catch me.
I walk up to him, grab a seat from an empty nearby desk and sit down. Three officers are paying attention to me. I can smell the stench of the sweat from the lot of them, mixed with cheap tylenol, a hint of gunpowder and the sad stale aura of depression and a life lived too intensely. Though maybe, that's just me.
"Hello officer. I'm here to surrender myself to your custody. We need to talk. Now."
The officer's eyes widen. Two more cops pay attention. An old lady, whose cancer is nearly killing her yet she's unaware of it, turns her head.
"Wow there, slow down. Your name, please?"
"Patrick Mayhew Donovan. You know me as The Stripper. I killed fifteen men over the past three years in this state. If you need names, I remember all of them. Details too."
The entire police station grew silent, besides a fan rotating on its axle, attempting to freshen up the air in here. Several officers clench their jaws, I can hear the grinding of their poorly maintained teeth, as well as the release of several clasps of holsters.
From my coat pocket, I pull out a set of polaroids. Pictures of crime scenes as I left them. Victims when they were alive and after she and I killed them, stripping them of their flesh, draining their blood. The pictures came down on the desk, and he saw them. His eyes went wide like a dear in headlights. The heart in his chest that is bound to fail in two years starts beating twice as fast as he sees the pictures. He stands up immediately, the chair he rested on falling backwards, clanging on the stone floor. The pistol in his holster is drawn with damn near expertise and is pointed at my head.
I have been seated in this room for about three hours now. It's strange, but I'm sure they need time to put it all together. They don't know what I know. What they have, what they found when they searched me, as puzzle pieces that are incomplete. They won't like what they'll see if they put the whole thing together.
My strange friend, the police officer named Daniel Lofter, stands behind the glass, along with a federal agent and a detective. They've been discussing things such as evidence, motive, probably cause, the case they've built over the years. It's mind-numbingly boring chit chat, for which I don't have time.
"I suggest you ask your questions quickly. My time is limited. Before long, my partner will now I went to the police and will come here to kill me. If she finds you standing between me and her, she'll wipe you off the face of the planet. I know you only found 11 bodies. I will tell you where the other 4 are, if you send someone here."
I realized I came across as a bit desperate. Now that I'm not near her anymore, I'm starting to feel something. An impending sense of doom, like people who suffer heart attacks do. She helped suppress the fear. But the thoughts behind the mirror were also starting to get harder to decipher. My power is waning. She knows. She'll be coming. Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned.
The detective, after some quick dialogue, retreats from the room, walks around the walls and enters the room, holding a rather thick folder. A woman with an aged complexion, dark, well maintain long curls and the body language of determination and confidence. I respect that.
She considers slamming the file on the table, but maintains her composure and gently sets it down. Now that she's closer, I can tell her basic thoughts. Diana. That's her name. The very face of professionality and discipline. Cool and calm, collected. But I can smell the fury in her breath. The seething disappointment. In her head, she imagines brutalizing me, beating me to a pulp with her fists and a chair. Kicking me, slamming my heard through the one-way mirror and grinding my neck across the broken glass, tearing my neck to pieces. But she doesn't.
"I'm here. Things align with what you've said so far. We have more questions."
"I have some things to say first. About my partner. She is coming."
"So you weren't acting alone?"
"No. No I wasn't."
"Well, I'd prefer we start from the beginning here, so if we can put a narrative of sorts together."
"There's not time for that. You don't get it, detective, and I envy your ignorance. I have seen what she does. I know what she can make people do. She walks in human form, but that thing is not human. She is beyond you, beyond me. I simply got too close to her, got infected by her very presence."
"I did not prepare myself for a comic book villain breakdown, so try to keep your cool, here. An interrogator is on the way."
"Detective Matthews. He's flying in from Houston. 43 years old, a wife and two kids. Worked in different positions of the force over the last 15 years, from patrol officer all the way to his current position. His wife feels lonely when he isn't around, because he's a workaholic. When he dies, he will be the kind of person to regret not having spent as much time with his children as he could. He feels guilty over it already, and drinks to make it go away. Well, that and some of the other experiences he's had. Stellar record with the force, though. A good choice. If my partner doesn't rip the plane out of the sky, just to let us know that she's coming because now that I know, so does she."
I can feel the anxiety in her head, crawling from the bottom of her brains, around the outside, to the top. As if skeletal hands cradle her brains and give it a squeeze. She looks back at the mirror. My friend Daniel seems confused, but the federal agent's face turn white as a sheet. He pulls out a phone and starts calling his superior.
"Listen to me, Diana."
"I never told you my name."
"Of all the ridiculous things I just said, that shouldn't be the worst. The reason why I'm involving you and everyone here is because I'm trying to expose my partner in crime. The more people know about her, the harder it is for her to erase her tracks and disappear. Will you listen?"
"You have my undivided attention."
"Thank you, detective."
"What can you tell me about this partner of yours?"
"Her preferred targets are men. She takes them, simply for the pleasure of tearing out of happiness in their hearts with her razor sharp teeth. I've seen her instill nightmares in men, leaving them weeping, gasping for air, making them call out her name. In her eyes, I see the ground and sky on fire, with no mercy at the end of days which she will bring. The blood of gods, fresh on her hands, with flaming wings and more eyes than I can count."
"This is hard to follow, Patrick."
"Fine. You want a description? She's beautiful. One look will take away your innocence, opening your mind to things you never could dream of before meeting her. She's a muse to anyone whose mind she breaks. Her hair is like fire, her skin like the porcelain of my grandmother's china set. Her eyes are greener than the leaves of summer. One look, and you'll know her name."
The federal agent returns to the room, phone still in hand, shocked. With a tremble in his hand and numbness in his mind, he tells Daniel of a plane crash just outside George Bush International. They both look at me.
"Her name is Jolene."
Objective-Ice8233 t1_j8arzrq wrote
goddammit is this a jojo reference
Cw86459 t1_j8cks6k wrote
I think Dolly Parton “Jolene” reference?
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