passable_nerd t1_j9j0z9f wrote
Reply to comment by Fepl31 in [PM] Give me a prompt as well as some rules to follow while writing the story. E.g 'You cannot use the letter E.' by ineedabettertitle
(I'm not OP, but this sounds interesting. Gonna hijack)
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I screamed and cried.
I calmed down in my mother's embrace.
I wriggled, happy to see new things.
I crawled. I reached for my toys and my parents.
I spoke. My parents were delighted.
I toddled, with help from father.
I walked. I moved myself without help.
I ran. I ran and played with friends.
I learned. Letters and numbers, skills and talents.
I loved.
I was hurt.
I loved again, despite the hurt. Despite the fear of more hurt.
I started a family.
I worked. I supported my family.
I saw my child, screaming and crying.
I saw them wiggling, crawling, walking, and running.
I helped them learn letters and numbers, skills and talents.
I grew tired, and stopped working.
I couldn't run anymore.
I couldn't walk without help.
I couldn't move anymore.
I couldn't speak for very long.
I watched as long as I could.
I felt my mother's embrace.
I left in silence.
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