youslash4 t1_jaabq87 wrote
I sink my teeth into the bar. The texture is strange, coarse, and the chocolate doesn't last long against the warmth of my mouth, quickly slipping away to a puddle of warm, flavored liquid within my mouth.
"Ugh, Carol, these things are disgusting." I jeer at her.
"..." No response.
I kneel before her, smiling lightly at the idea that she may finally celebrate her birthday with her parents. She hasn't been able to for so long, after all, and I'm sure they've bought her a simply ridiculous cake, with the most overly colorful, eyeball-assaulting colors they could find, though always containing the exact same message.
"Happy birthday! We love you!"
I wince further, as my body compels itself to take another bite of the unfortunate-tasting treat. It isn't long before the wafer and puddled chocolate once again assault my tongue, creasing my face in the progress. I straighten out the wrapper, reading the ingredients and smiling faintly at the bright red logo.
"I used to like these things, you know.." I look at her longingly, awaiting her response.
"..." No response.
"You loved them though. I always made an effort to save you one, each Friday as I passed that vending machine outside work. You know the one?"
My speech slows, and tears begin their advance on the defenses of my eyes.
"I... guess, over 13 years.. you forget the taste.. " I whimper, unable to fully contain the sheer volume of liquid attempting to leave my eyeballs.
"..Here. s-so you d-don't forget... the t-taste. S-so you don't forget... me.."
Relieved to be free of the revolting concoction, I place the half I'd initially snapped away down atop the Earth before me, placing a shivering hand atop her.
"I love you... C-Carol... Happy birthday.."
I fold the wrapper in my hands, and leave her to enjoy her treat. It was always her favorite.
Feraligreater328 t1_jabf7ac wrote
I lost my "Carol" last month. You did an excellent job of describing the process of this sort of thing. You tend to forget the little, stupid things like that just become part of the everyday wallpaper until you eat, or drink, or smell something that reminds you of the person that used to be there.
Every time I smell something cherry or hear the sound of boots clomping, I think my "Carol" is walking up behind me and I turn to see nothing. And it's enough to break the heart every single time.
And I'm not sure what I'm going to do on her first birthday without her later this year, myself.
Very, very effective writing. 10/10.
ElectricalCake4044 t1_jaaz1ic wrote
Damn ninjas and their onions.
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