Submitted by Virgonidas t3_11bjki7 in WritingPrompts
Virgonidas OP t1_ja2rzgp wrote
Reply to comment by taffycat24 in [WP] "Seeking wealth is not inherently evil. Like power, gold is a tool that can be used for both good and evil. Therefore, squire, when someone says that they "only in it for the coins", make them elaborate what are the coins for, THEN judge their character from that." by Virgonidas
Is just as you said, plus the messy punctuation. As for the story, it feels like it uses or adress the prompt a bit too loosely, compared to the other stories. As if its just an afterthought, if you will.
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