Sl0thCh1ld t1_j89gqm9 wrote on February 12, 2023 at 5:31 PM

Reply to comment by Krutaun in [WP] Every once in a while the luck a Guardian angel uses to make your life better runs out. That's the days recalled with "but wait, it gets worse." Your guardian angel was stalled for a week getting back with new luck and your life will not be the same. by LynxInSneakers

This is great, there were a few parts that you bounce between past and present tense that confused me a little, but it's the best piece I've read this week.

Krutaun t1_j89jqsw wrote on February 12, 2023 at 5:51 PM

Ah, thanks! I do tend to let things like tense slip up after I write for a bit, but I'm glad you like it anyway!