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Apex_121 t1_j92atqg wrote

YoUr NaMe IS MaDiSon

That's it. There's nothing else. I flip the paper over. There's nothing written on the back. I walk around the room, counting my paces. 36 steps wall to wall. It's a perfect cube. I frown and look down at my clothes, a white cotton midi night dress, not unlike the ones women would wear years ago. There's a pocket with something in it. I narrow my eyes and pull it out. It's a pen. I look it over, sitting down to take it apart and put it together again. "Yep... Its a pen" I sigh, grabbing the paper. I read the line over and over again. I say it out loud, I read it backwards, I even reverse the syllables but it doesn't make sense. Nothing does. I scribble out letters, maybe it's an anagram? Nope. Doesn't work.

"Madison. My name is Madison." I can't deny... It feels right. It feels like my name. Why can't I remember anything? I go back to pacing, nibbling at my lip. I guess I have a habit? The metallic taste of Iron fills my mouth as I keep nibbling while I think. My hands start clicking. What? Why? It's like every part of my body has to be moving. I can't keep anything still. Now I want to jump. I start jumping, my body moving itself. Why? Why can I not keep still? Now my head is bopping. I try to look around but can't. I'm not in control here. Am I going crazy? Suddenly I freeze - my whole body going rigid. I can see green numbers - wait that's binary code. Why can I see binary? I feel my energy drain, and my eyes start to close. I fight it. I don't want to sleep. I'm scared. Will I remember when I wake up? My eyes eventually shut and I feel my body drop. Then there's darkness.

I wake up in a pure white room. There's nothing with me... Just my clothes and a piece of paper. I open the folded paper.

YoUr NaMe IS MaDiSon yOu ArE NoT hUMaN

That's it. There's nothing else.

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Crystal1501 OP t1_j92e5d4 wrote

Some kind of robot or computer?

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Apex_121 t1_j92er58 wrote

Yeah kind of. The idea is she's human but slowly being forced to turn in to a robot. Hence why when she bled from her lip, she lost control. The binary was "them" checking the coding and finding something wrong hence her being "shut down".

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TheFinalDawnYT t1_j93s777 wrote

Now i want a continuation.

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Apex_121 t1_j94ajpi wrote

I can try but I honestly don't know where to go from here :D

The story is supposed to repeat until she's the "perfect" robot and then at the end, there's a hint that she's turning human.

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