gregorydgraham t1_iwfpig8 wrote
Reply to comment by corsicanguppy in Salt Lake City's city council voted in favor of a project to build a small community of tiny homes for people experiencing chronic homelessness! by Taintastic
“I don’t think” - this is weak, you need to pump it up with “only an idiot thinks”
“Worked well” - this is an obvious weasel word (albeit a compound one), avoid slipperiness with “worked at all”.
“They may work better” - this is both weak and weaselly. Try “they only ever work”
“But that may be rare and doesn’t seem to be definitely the case here” - Ay caramba! Do you kiss your girlfriend with those lips? Even “but I don’t think so” would’ve been better
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