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xWhiteRYNOx OP t1_j26qje1 wrote

Yes, but I'm not trying to write an essay. I'm not in school. This is the internet. This is the place for long, crazy ramblings.

   Is this better? Is this how you want me to do it? A few sentances, a new idea, skip down, and indent? This is only ever used to do essays, or for more "formal" occasions. This is just some random writings, of a person with many ideas, and not in order.

   My brain is filled with many ideas at once. Mainly, at this moment, how pointless this sentance structure is, especially online. I get off topic, then bounce back, and to another topic, then back.... Hard to do "paragraphs", without having a set thesis, and 3 talking points...

   Most of the time, for "essay form", the first paragraph is your "summary". It explains what your point is that you are trying to make, it Kay's out 3 key talking points, and just to give an understanding of why you are writing an essay. Then, the next 3 paragraphs are about those 3 talking points, mentioned in the first paragraph. The last paragraph is a closing paragraph. It re summarizes your points, and thesis.

   I am not here to write an essay, nor to have my writings "graded". You see, all the time, all the people who spell words wrong, use no commas, or any punctuation, let alone some grammar, and you are going to come at me about not having some random writings in paragraph form? Sorry. You will not find that on the internet. This is actually good compared to the grammar and punctuation of some others.

   But to answer your question, yes. I do know about paragraphs. I know what they are, why they are used, and how to use them. But I'm not here to satisfy, every single person, grammatically. I'm not here to judge others, or to down them, or correct/collect their essays. Only to try to spread love, and encouragement, and try to help some open their eyes. I got dealt a shitty hand, and the deck is stacked against me, yet I am more kind, and positive, and helpful than others. Some people are so miserable, for no reason... Cheer up. This world is a beautiful place. Beauty is everywhere around us. It's up to us to recognize it. If we spend out whole lives, with our head down, following the person in front of us, we will never see the lush, green mountains, that meet a baby blue sky, with puffy white clouds... No beauty where you are? I call bullshit. On the atomic scale, all the way up to mega-parses of space, and all levels in between, there exists beauty, and wonder, and hope. If you can't see it, it's either because you are not looking, or do not want to. I love everyone. I just wish we treated others better. So much cruelty, judgment, and criticism in this world today, but instead of helping fix the issue, most just point, and laugh, or keep their head down. It's good to mind your own business, but it's never wrong to try to help someone in need.
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