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Extension_Ok t1_iqrz7f2 wrote

I read the first few pages. The unusual names and style make it harder to read than necessary. Spelling and grammar seem to be better than other self published books I read.

It seems to be a little thirsty. Is this intentional?

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Youmeanmoidoid t1_iqtcd5g wrote

This style is very common when it comes to Japanese light novels. Kind of a mix between scriptwriting and traditional novel. This is the first time I've seen it outside that whole Japanese genre though. It's a really specific style of writing for a really specific genre. As long as OP likes it that's what matters. But I'll just say it probably won't really appeal to readers in the traditional market. The cover is great. Though, like others have said, is really more found in the YA category.

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